Lie Next To Me
That raw poison used to shake my soul.
Copyright © 2014 by Norah Vawter
That raw poison used to shake my soul.
In this particular piece, the author, Jennifer combined 2 Lines with the 111 words of anything goes. Notice how cleverly she wove the prompt lines “the girl shifts her buttock, but they keep circling,” in her narrative. Her use of crass language is reminiscent of the author of those two lines, Charles Bukowski. All in all, good work for a few minutes of time.
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I am an author, and a poet, but I have never sought to publish my poetry before as it was deemed too dark and heavy, laden with a melancholy and metaphysical twist that most people could not relate to. I grew up in North Africa, a tribal Amazigh feminist girl in a repressive regime, witnessing many dark things that have scarred my memory. I grew up around the mystical marabouts and the witch doctors that ruled over the souls, I was exposed to a wilderness of spirit and bare human cruelty that the West seldom comprehends; radicalisation, jihad, organ trafficking and the likes.
William Doreski’s most recent book is The Suburbs of Atlantis (2013). His poetry, fiction, and reviews have appeared in many journals. He lives in Peterborough, NH.
Upon a mountain we climbed together as one.
As we are looking back to achievement sublime.
Our memories of climbing the mountain are ones that stay.
We travel back to times of either being strong or weak.
Halfway through our climb is fading trace by trace.
With memories linked to a scene where past doubts are defaced.
The radiance of seeing the world from its’ greatest height.